Howdy again, TomF!
You really should be using more common shops.
Your Worship Red Alert on your Admin Report is due to you not building shines to every god, not enough priests (dedicated priests work better) & keeping them lit up most of the time. Worship is the toughest part for New Players to master. It will come.
A Health Center is both a hospital & an apothecary with a dedicated Health Priest in the middle, all very close to each other. You are missing one of them.
I also see blockage & some wrongly turned buildings, but most are fine. Every building should be properly turned (click-hold-drag while placing or use the R key). Every building should have a road or space in front of their front door. Most buildings will still work, but not as well.
Looking good!
